They are wandering shoes, soles worn through walking, tips taped in layers of silver. The dust that coats them is the dust of a hundred places, scattered far and wide.
She wore them for many years, when her stomach roared with hunger and her fingers stung with cold. Now they sit beside a half-dozen other pairs, shining and new.
Her husband tells her to throw them away, but she cannot bring herself to do it. It would be like throwing away a part of herself.
When she dies, she will be buried in those shoes, to wander once more.
Word Count: 99
This is for Friday Fictioneers. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for running the challenge!
Good for her, they have served her too well to be simply discarded
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Some people are attached to trivial things because of sentiments. Can’t blame her.
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They’re just too important to part with -all those memories. Beautifully done JA
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My pleasure
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They are just like friends, bless their soles!
My FriFic tale is called Jim and Jan!
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Poignant story, J.A.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Lots of memories. Lovely story.
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I love this. Poignant and evocative.
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That was a lovely story – so beautifully written.
Susan A Eames at
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Well narrated. Poignant.
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I understand her sentimentalism…..well done!
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Ah, the affection of comfortable things. Nice sentiments.
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As it should be. Hubby should understand!
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He should. Thanks for commenting!
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She sure likes her shoes! Cute story!
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I like the sense of her wandering on into eternity.
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I imagine the dust and dirt to be a bit like a diary. Well done.
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