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Freezing in the door, she wondered what she had done wrong. Miz Megrete told her if she did things in order, Max would be hers. She had gathered herbs, lit the appropriate candles and read the required words, expecting to find Max on his knees, begging for her hand in marriage. But when the smoke cleared, she found herself face to face with a belligerent cat. She wanted her money back!
Musings From the Turnip Patch 
hahaha…i didn’t expect that. So well done…i sure hope she gets her money back…
Bravo! A really original submission on this photo prompt. Way to go girl.
Oh, dear…hope she got her money back!!
Now that was unique. However, she might be happier in the long run with the cat.
Happy Christmas,
Rochelle
We are both in similar minds this week it seems – spooky! (sorry)
I like your story
Happy Christmas
Dee
See, I think she got a good deal here… 🙂 Nice one.
Love potion #9 Lives I suppose. Very clever. At least now he wil be pampered, have all his wants and needs met, and not have to work for a living. Not a bad deal.
and i would want my money back too if i were in that situation. stand your ground! and well done.
maybe she just didn’t follow instructions well. I always start out then read the instructions after it is done and not working! Merry Christmas
She might be best just to keep the cat and forget the rest.
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2012/12/21/friday-fictioneers-11/
Oops! Careful with those love potions! I wonder if she’ll keep the cat.
Love it.
Got me chuckling. Definitely a money-back situation. I was thinking you might want her “freezing in the doorway” rather than “in the door”, although with a witch, you never can tell.
Merry, merry Christmas.
Be careful what you wish for….and forget about the money. I have a feeling you got the better deal. Thanks for the chuckle. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
I’d want my money back, too! Funny story. Thanks!
Lovely story. Hopefully Max will see she’s the woman for him without the need for charms and herbs?
A great take on the prompt. Nice job
Tom
Unless Max was the belligerent cat staring at her! She might have to spend more money on whatever magic caused this to revert the damage! lol
Nice take on the prompt.
Merry Christmas!