It’s time for Friday Fictioneers. Thank you to the talented and lovely Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for her time and energy hosting this group, as well as the photo for this week’s prompt.
My story follows. As always, thanks for reading.
More stories from the Fictioneers can be found here.
Copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Memory Box (100 words)
“Can I play with the shoe? My dolly could wear it,” Trina said.
“No,” her mother said. “These aren’t toys.”
“What about this little bowl? I could use it in my playhouse.”
“These aren’t toys you can play with.”
“What are they for then?” Trina asked.
“They’re here to admire. They’re memories,” her mother smiled.
“What about this medicine bottle?”
“Oh, that’s where that’s been. I guess someone didn’t remember where it belongs,” her mother sighed.
“What kind of memory is that? To not remember?”
“Exactly,” her mother nodded. “This is why we have a memory box. We want to never forget.”
Great dialog! Very well done. 🙂
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Thanks, Jackie!
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Memories are more powerful when the reminders can be handled.
And if the child gets to play with them, new memories!
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Right. They will then become different memories and probably never seen again! I wish I had a memory box after writing this. What about you?
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I have a few cigar boxes with concert ticket stubs and a bunch of pictures. I have a small handmade ceramic cup that was a gift with some personal odds and ends, and a necklace with a plastic token that I almost never take off.
And I have my wedding ring.
All in all, probably one cubed foot of stuff. More than enough, and I can still carry the whole thing with me if needed.
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Guapo, I’m so touched by this. It’s the little things you can hold in the palm of your hand that end up meaning the most in your life. If you had to leave in a hurry, you know exactly what you’d take. Thanks for sharing this with me.
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Oh, well if it’s a fire-escape thing, I’d grab my guitars too! 😉
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Ha ha. Good call!
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What a sweet conversation. Very nice teachable moment.
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Thanks, Honie. I went with sweet. In my other story idea, the character smashes the box! I guess I’m feeling soft today.
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LOL Yeah, I’ve had a few characters like that lately. Not in FF, but in my book. They have all received fair warning, if they don’t cooperate I’ll just knock ’em off.
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You’re nice to warn them! They have no excuses then…
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That’s right, no excuses. 🙂
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lovely piece Amy. Memories are important, knowing where to find them is just as important.
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Thanks, Summer! I imagine having memories you can hold and touch would be powerful, especially if they were all contained in one place. My life has never been that organized!
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it’s always lovely how something as “insignificant” as a medicine bottle can have so much intrinsic value. that’s why i have a box with hockey pucks and concert ticket stubs, a #9 billiard ball, my initials stolen from a holiday inn message board, etc.
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Rich, that’s pretty cool. I had a collection once of ticket stubs, many from movies, but I don’t know what happened to it. What’s the significance of the #9 ball? The first strike ball? That’s a nice collection you have, even if parts of it were stolen. I guess that’s the best stuff, huh?
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Yup. “Borrowed.” The 9 balls were stolen from pool tables in various cities during hockey tournaments. As were my initials.
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This weeks pic made me wish I’d started a memory box, lol. Great read 🙂
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Thanks, Helen. Me, too!
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Great dialogue. What more is there to say.
Tom
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Thanks, Tom! Thanks for reading. I’ll stop over to yours. I’m a bit late in reading this week.
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Dear Amy.
Perfect story for this prompt. It truly is filled with memories, right down to the masking tape ball next to the eraser stub. It’s actually one of two boxes. The one next to it is larger and has the rest of the Howdy Doody figures from my older brother’s 6th birthday cake. They have survived because my mother would never let us play with them and I, in turn, wouldn’t allow my children to play with them. “These aren’t toys, they’re keepsakes.”
Well done with natural dialogue.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Ah, I knew this was a special keepsake box for you. It made me wish I had one and that my mother had kept one. But, someone needs to start one. Maybe I’ll start one for my kids! They love little objects, and I would need to keep it “out of sight/out of mind.” As soon as they get their hands on things, they vanish or they’re at the bottom of some box! It’s a good idea to keep them tucked away and not for play. I can see why your mother did that.
Thank you.
Amy
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Hi Amy,
Very realistic mother-daughter conversation with a real-life observation to wrap it up. Nicely done. Ron
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A soft tale of tragedy..
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Yes, I think so, too. Thanks, Managua.
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I love how the memory box serves to keep objects that can act as totems for memory. Great piece.
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Thank you!
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Someday Trina will know … and probably have her own memory box.
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I hope so, Frank. Or, maybe she’ll inherit this one. Thanks for reading.
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Loved this Amy, the dialogue is so realistic. It is truly amazing the number of seemingly unimportant things we keep, just because of the memories they hold.
Dee
🙂
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Thank you, Dee. This made me think I need to hold onto a few more things before they get lost. I think there’s something to having a special place for memories to be preserved.
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I like the twist you snuck in with the medicine bottle. Subtle. Nice touch
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Thanks, Audra! It snuck itself in all by itself somehow.
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The interpretation on the reader?
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No, really….that’s how these come together sometimes! I feel like it’s a little puzzle that comes together, and especially nice when I don’t over think it.
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It’s amazing the significance that memories give to normal items. The daughter seems toys but the mother sees the story behind them, like they’re windows to something much bigger. I like this a lot.
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I appreciate that. Thank you, David! My story feels on the very normal side this week, but sometimes that’s okay!
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I collect too many things, and one day… no doubt, I will have to explain what it all means, to my kids. Or, maybe they’ll just have to sort through all my treasures when I’m gone. 😉 I like the way you interpreted this. I just threw my hat in the Fictioneer’s ring. Fun challenge, and I was inspired by reading yours each time you post, Amy. Thanks!
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Thanks, Dawn. It was a pleasure to read yours this week! I hope you want to continue with these. They’re really fun and I think they’ve really helped my writing a lot.
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I plan to continue… I’ve got some interesting writing things happening, and I’ve been falling behind (in general) lately. Hopefully, with summer ending and a more regulated schedule in place, I’ll start falling in line too. I find that my blog, itself, has really upped my writing game. Writing often, and challenging myself there has improved my overall writing… or so say the wonderful women in my writing group! 🙂 Thanks for the encouragement Amy; much appreciated!
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I really enjoyed this conversation – the inquisitive determination of the child is clear. I can see her face-pulling as she says, “What kind of memory is that? To not remember?”
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Thanks, Sarah! I’m glad that come out of your reading of it.
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I need a couple of these!
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Thanks, Dawn! Me, too.
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Amy.. lovely dialogue.. and it almost gives me inspiration for a memory box
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Almost, huh? I felt the same, if only I could get organized enough. It seems like it would be time well spent! Thank you.
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Good lesson here, Amy. Maybe I need to start boxing away “toys” or objects with emotional ties. I’m great at preserving artwork. But, there’s tons more I could save if I had more room in my garage.
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It’s a thought, huh. I have some of the kids’ clothes when they were babies, and they have lots of trinkets, but you know, they aren’t boxed or anything. They live among all the clutter that happens if I don’t keep on top of things. I think if I started with a cool little box like this, I might be capable of collecting a few things! Thanks for reading, Anka.
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Dear Amy,
What a lovely story. Yes, memory boxes have many meanings for the families involved. Time passes and the children learn the significance of things and join the adults.
Aloha,
Doug
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Dear Doug,
Thanks, as always, for your kind words. It does have me thinking about the importance of memories and the role they play in our lives, and how they translate into our writing. Not that my story talked about that. Anyway, that kind of carried over for me. Thanks for reading.
Aloha,
Amy
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Another one of your pieces that just… ‘feels’ so… ‘real’ (if that makes any sense)! I wish my ‘memory box’ held a few more descriptive words (I feel like I’m one step away from grunting at this point)… but very, very nicely done, Amy… that’s my main point. 🙂
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Grunting works just fine, Robert, and I happen to think you’re far from grunting. I appreciate your lovely thoughts! 🙂
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The misplaced medicine bottle provides a great counterpoint for the purpose of the memory box–well done.
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I appreciate that. Thanks and thanks for reading.
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Lovely 🙂
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Thanks, Becky. You’re lovely!
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Hi amy,
i must say, this was indeed a great piece. In fact, it reminded me of my childhood days! well, as any other child, i was very inquisitive about almost anything and everything. i carried an yellow doll always , no matter where i go.But then, as time went by, i misplaced it somewhere.Thanks to this memory box , my mind is all set for an exploration
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Thanks. I’m glad this stirred up memories for you. It made me want to start my own memory box. I hope you find your yellow doll somewhere! Thanks for stopping by.
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This was great. I read it the other day and have been meaning to comment. You captured that conversation very well. I don’t feel comfortable writing dialogue and I’m envious of all those who can make it flow. 🙂
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Thank you, La La. I appreciate that very much. This one was definitely dialog heavy, which I like to do actually.
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