Happy Friday everyone! It’s time for another episode of Friday Fictioneers. Here is this week’s pictorial prompt
As always…let me encourage you to stop by Rochelle’s place and read a few of the many wonderful submissions she gets weekly. http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2013/09/04/6-september-2013/
Here is my offering.
The Dimension-board
Rita picked her nose with the broken door knob. Her therapist told her that the dimension-board was just a delusion created by her obsession with Jason. She knew better.
She picked up the baby buggy from the bottom shelf of the dimension-board/ curiosity-shelf and spoke into the left wheel like she’d seen Jason do.
“Hello. This is Rita, Jason’s stalker. He’s been dragged into the forest by a big blue meanie. I’m coming to get some help now.”
Rita took hold of the shells in the corner and a then touched the yellow roller-skate.
The air hummed.
When the sheriff arrived all he found was the smashed door and a swatch of blue fur.
That was weirdly intriguing, lol 🙂
Why thank you!
That Rita was a real case!
Yes she was! Thanks for reading Patti!
Kinda scary, actually.
Why thank you!
You LIKE being scary, “Jack”??
Only on Mondays and Thursdays 🙂
Well then, maybe I’ll check back tomorrow….
Please do! 😉
Dear Joe,
Funny she doesn’t look blue-ish. I’m not completely sure what happened here. Did the Blue Meanie come and eat her. Put me more in mind of a Yellow Submarine than a yellow roller skate.
shalom,
Rochelle
Oh so many speculative endings!Thank you Rochelle for feeling the piece. The bindings of delusion are indeed in keeping with the submarine! I may take the suggestion and develop Rita beyond a 100 word piece.
I think we need an expansion of your story, cause there’s unresolved trouble and I’ve tuned in.
Thanks .
I am thinking I will take your suggestion.
Entertaining story, twisted and inventive, and now I’m afraid to go outside for fear of big blue meanies. Ron
Thanks for reading Ron. I am truly sorry to have firghtened you but not to worry they only eat inter-dimensionals.
Yes, me too – I’m with Ron above. I am still afraid of things that go bump in the night – and swaths of blue fur…
Thanks for stopping by to read.
Wow Joe, this pic really brought out your demented side.
Interesting.
I guess it did. I may have to develop this story line.
Hmmmmm….
I like how you referred to it as a dimension shelf/curiosity-shelf. I think Rita is not yet done with therapy. It had a spooky feel!
Indeed she is not! Thanks for reading.
Dear Lillie Put,
I saw you there.
Aloha,
Doug
Aloha Doug! Thanks for reading!
Oddly intriguing.
Why thank you!